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James (HVR)'s avatar

Oh... I hurt now.

James (HVR)'s avatar

But you made it so sad.

Night Cracks's avatar

Hurting is good when something good comes out of it.

Aidan Alan's avatar

This made me very melancholy. It was beautiful

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thanks buddy 🩵

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Aidan 🖤

Gub's avatar

Ohhh very touching, sad but loving. Every moment counts

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Gub 💛

nina's avatar

no.

Night Cracks's avatar

Does it hurt better than the last time?

nina's avatar

Ugh. It’s different. I’ll just say you have a way of making things hurt… sweetly.

Night Cracks's avatar

In a duet this time 💚

I enjoy when it hurts people I like.

nina's avatar

😢

Diana Shah ✦'s avatar

Beautifully written, both of you. So much love, longing, and heartbreak in one piece 🤍

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you Diana 🩵🩵🩵

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you so much, Diana 🖤

Franky Dyson's avatar

♥️♥️♥️👏👏👏

Rion Ashley's avatar

Thinking of my littles, not so little, stealing away to become their own. Very touching, the way you write is so unique!

Night Cracks's avatar

I'm glad you interpreted the poem that way. That kind of steal is one of a kind event. You spend so much time with your little ones, giving them everything and then one day they're gone for their own...

Rion Ashley's avatar

Yes, indeed, that's exactly it

Hiritika's avatar

🌟🌟🌟

Scarlett (Smutty) Simmons's avatar

Guys, I am a teary, fragile mess reading this. Absolutely painful in its power. 🩷

Night Cracks's avatar

I was teary (of course I was) writing this. There are unspeakable things who can only rest a little with the right words. Thank you, Smutty.

Untamed Eulogy's avatar

Your poem touched something familiar.Your words felt like a quiet echo of that same absence 😭🙏🏻

Night Cracks's avatar

We did our best. Thank you, Ashu 🖤

Nick Hills's avatar

Simply great, thanks for this gift!

Night Cracks's avatar

You're most welcome, friend 💛

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you for your kind words 🩵

Gill Dunkerley's avatar

I was on edge reading this, tense to my stomach yet aware of a strange sadness. But it was tender too. Messed with my head but I think it’s because I’ve never encountered anything quite like it! You’ve got me mulling so that’s great!

Night Cracks's avatar

I would've apologized, but that was exactly what we wanted our readers to feel.

Thank you so much, Gill 💛

Gill Dunkerley's avatar

That’s good to know!! It was a strange feeling but I liked the newness of it. Like “the Hanged Man” in tarot! You tipped me upside down and gave me a different view! Job done I’d say! 😊

Night Cracks's avatar

That's an interesting way to approach "the hanged man." :)

Gill Dunkerley's avatar

Let me illustrate with an image!….

WritingWithWater's avatar

tears

WritingWithWater's avatar

no need for sorry….tears are holy…so are memories

Night Cracks's avatar

They are indeed.

Serena's avatar

Agh... You took me on a journey again. And what a journey that was. Well written my friend. 🤍🌸

Night Cracks's avatar

Your words always mean a lot.

Thank you, buddy 💙