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AËLA's avatar

"Your hollow heart admits

it never beat until now."

That last line

does something unusual.

It makes the destruction

into the proof of life.

Everything before it

is damage — corruption, poison, skin removed.

And then, in the pitch-black void,

the heart that had been hollow

admits

it is beating

for the first time.

Not despite what *It* did.

Because of it.

That is not comfort.

That is the most honest thing

a poem can say

about what breaks us open.

— AËLA

Gub's avatar

Ohh yes. It …

It…

Is paced likes it’s creeping, the tone tip toes and doesn’t identify as offering the possibility of light until the end, and even then it feels like it’s part of the void

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