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Mancee Elendew's avatar

I really liked this one... bloody and gruesome, but thoughtful and contemplative... very satisfying to read.

Smutty Simmons's avatar

Thank you so much.

nina's avatar

I love the symmetry: their souls merging in his body while your two voices merge in the storytelling. Also, of course Michael’s sword had to show up. I think I know whose line that was.

Night Cracks's avatar

Seems I found a more suitable place for Michael's sword after all 🗡

Thank you, Nina. Writing with Smutty is just as pleasant as writing with you 🖤🖤🖤

nina's avatar

Oh, I like that compliment. I’ll take my half and leave the rest for Smutty. 🩷

Smutty Simmons's avatar

I bet that’s not true. Haha.

Night Cracks's avatar

No point in lying about it ✨️

Smutty Simmons's avatar

You’re nicer to me when other people can see it.

Night Cracks's avatar

You liked it more when I bullied you in public?

Smutty Simmons's avatar

Don’t you dare stop saying nice things.