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Aaliya's avatar

Such a hauntingly beautiful poem and deeply moving. The imagery and emotions are so vivid, capturing a sense of vulnerability and longing.

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Aaliya 💚💚💚

sadandslutty⭐️'s avatar

Give me your brain

Night Cracks's avatar

It's already being tickled by your thingers.

You're aware you influenced this, right?

sadandslutty⭐️'s avatar

I feel honoured that it’s being tickled by my thingers and wait really?

Night Cracks's avatar

Are you surprised talking about all this calories in spit, being flayed and toxic boys? 😅

I was on my way back home from kindergarten and I got this haunting rhythm and internal dialogue. It took me 1 hour to finish it, including editorials.

Smutty Simmons's avatar

Your poems always hit me somewhere I don’t expect.

Night Cracks's avatar

Where this time?

Colon? Left ear? Amygdala?

Smutty Simmons's avatar

Hippocampus

Night Cracks's avatar

That doesn't sound very good.

I'm a little scared your hippopotamus might bite me in the arse now.

Smutty Simmons's avatar

Don’t you forget it.

Not Exactly Ana's avatar

Keep writing poems like this one!

Night Cracks's avatar

Oh. Hey, Ana!

Is that an order?

Not Exactly Ana's avatar

Let’s say, it’s a friendly reminder that you are doing great work 🤍

Night Cracks's avatar

🖤🖤🖤

Ryan Eland's avatar

You weave vulnerability and sensuality together so beautifully in this. The questioning pet names throughout…oof.

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, buddy 🖤

Releasing inner daemons once in a while provides such a relief…

Mancee Elendew's avatar

I love the way you write about the twilight moments - the moments that fall between one thing and another... There's so much tension to be explored there, and you never disappoint.

Night Cracks's avatar

I tried to write about non-twilight moments and failed miserably.

That’s why collabs work so good in my case - a little sunny addition to my murk is always welcomed.

Mancee Elendew's avatar

I like the murk.

Night Cracks's avatar

🖤🖤🖤

Mirage's avatar

Wow... achingly beautiful 🥺

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you 🖤

Gub's avatar

Proper reaching into the dark depths of humanity, bro. It reads like the feminine has a tortured voice, horrific almost horror-like scene.

Bravo

Night Cracks's avatar

People willingly suffer like that, before they learn the price. Love is ruthless.

Nick Hills's avatar

Wow, great end bro! I didn't expect it!

Night Cracks's avatar

Thanks bro 💘💘💘