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~MERAKI's avatar

Can't believe it's finally done!

Great job, us!

Sam Oldman's avatar

I love the density here. It feels heavy though poem flows right through you.

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Sam!

I’m glad we managed to create it despite the differences.

Working with @~MERAKI was such a fun game 🧡🧡🧡

Mahnoor✨'s avatar

Grief but make it beautiful?

The best kind of thing I read in a while, indeed.

I love this phrase too much: the darkness, and it took me thirty years to understand the beauty of shadows of your light.

Great workkk!!!

Night Cracks's avatar

I don’t think I can write my poetry without baring myself to anyone willing to take a look. Also - it wouldn’t come out of me if not the most talented and tender @~MERAKI.

Thank you so much, Mahnoor!

Gub's avatar

devastation becomes beautiful here, oh poetry.

Beautiful collaboration

Night Cracks's avatar

Thanks, bro!

I always wait for your comment 🖤

Gub's avatar

Awn! I’ll keep that in mind Polish bro!

I like your collab phase, fun to read and view variety from the same author

Night Cracks's avatar

Hell yea, man…ette 🤣

It’s like throwing all the unexpected spices and ingredients to the cauldron of my voidy soup.

YUMMY!

You know your turn is coming too, right (I hope at least?)

Gub's avatar

Manette!! 😂Word of the effing day!

Oh…shit. Better saddle up then eh

~MERAKI's avatar

Ah, yes devastation with a pulse. Thank you, for reading it so closely. 🤍

Alicia's avatar

A shattering, echoing cry of grief. Exceptional. 🕯️

Night Cracks's avatar

That was the intention.

Thank you, Alicia 🖤

~MERAKI's avatar

Your words echo the heart of the piece. I really appreciate that. 🤍

Pratishtha's avatar

Chills, such devastatingly beautiful piece

~MERAKI's avatar

Thank you 🤍

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you so much 💖💖💖

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Night Cracks's avatar

It’s devastating, isn’t it?

It only proves how similar we all are, despite all the differences.

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Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you so much, Castor! 💖

This time it wouldn’t be possible without the most talented, wise and gentle @~MERAKI.