A love story about pretty scars and the violence of softness.
I'm a little nervous to go back and read Part I, tbh. Kinda have a feeling it's gonna wreck me. OK, deep breath, here I go.
Part I is I think the hardest to go through, because of the emotional density and no light. It’s pitch black. 🖤🖤🖤
If you read part II, you can go for part III 😉
Man… trauma is crazy…
I gave them the happy ending which had like… hmmm… 0.1% chance? 💔
More like 0.00001%
True 😭😭😭
Damn! You pulled me in.
Did I? 😭😭😭 I’m afraid you might be past the point of no return then…
Did you start with Part III, though?
You should’ve eased in with my hoetry/poetry, not go straight for the heavy artillery 🤣
Just in case you want to go back to the tutorial:
https://nightcracks.substack.com/p/i-renounce
Don't be afraid! I can take It!! Looking forward..
“They took care of her crooked teeth first.”
Hahaha!
Fucked up story with a happy ending. I did want trauma story from the man as well but, I’ll take it, let the reader decide.
It was well written, engaging with dark humour and flowy, dramatic descriptions.
A message of healing, love and kept the intent of the “violence of softness”
Very entertaining 3 part!
Glad you liked it, Gub! 🖤🖤🖤
We all deserve a happy ending time to time, don't we?
Thanks for reading and reaching out!
I love this!!! 😍
Did you enjoy the ending? :)
Thank you, Fiona. 🖤🖤🖤
I did!
I’m not a big fan of happy endings (at least as per writing), but I vomited so much darkness before it, that this time I guess it felt deserved?
I like that you gave them a happy ending despite EVERYTHING being against them. I want that for my marriage! 😍 😂
Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you: For every one that asketh receiveth; and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened.
♥️♥️♥️
You brought me back to church! 😀 "Press down shaken together and running over!"
Like your work 🎩
Thanks, Leo!
If I were you I would start with my hoetry/poetry though, not the third part of my only fiction 🤣🤣🤣
Check this one out, bud:
I'm a little nervous to go back and read Part I, tbh. Kinda have a feeling it's gonna wreck me. OK, deep breath, here I go.
Part I is I think the hardest to go through, because of the emotional density and no light. It’s pitch black. 🖤🖤🖤
If you read part II, you can go for part III 😉
Man… trauma is crazy…
I gave them the happy ending which had like… hmmm… 0.1% chance? 💔
More like 0.00001%
True 😭😭😭
Damn! You pulled me in.
Did I? 😭😭😭 I’m afraid you might be past the point of no return then…
Did you start with Part III, though?
You should’ve eased in with my hoetry/poetry, not go straight for the heavy artillery 🤣
Just in case you want to go back to the tutorial:
https://nightcracks.substack.com/p/i-renounce
Don't be afraid! I can take It!! Looking forward..
“They took care of her crooked teeth first.”
Hahaha!
Fucked up story with a happy ending. I did want trauma story from the man as well but, I’ll take it, let the reader decide.
It was well written, engaging with dark humour and flowy, dramatic descriptions.
A message of healing, love and kept the intent of the “violence of softness”
Very entertaining 3 part!
Glad you liked it, Gub! 🖤🖤🖤
We all deserve a happy ending time to time, don't we?
Thanks for reading and reaching out!
I love this!!! 😍
Did you enjoy the ending? :)
Thank you, Fiona. 🖤🖤🖤
I did!
I’m not a big fan of happy endings (at least as per writing), but I vomited so much darkness before it, that this time I guess it felt deserved?
I like that you gave them a happy ending despite EVERYTHING being against them. I want that for my marriage! 😍 😂
Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you: For every one that asketh receiveth; and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened.
♥️♥️♥️
You brought me back to church! 😀 "Press down shaken together and running over!"
Like your work 🎩
Thanks, Leo!
If I were you I would start with my hoetry/poetry though, not the third part of my only fiction 🤣🤣🤣
Check this one out, bud:
https://nightcracks.substack.com/p/i-renounce