This poem beautifully captures the essence of love and longing, painting vivid images of connection and escape. It speaks to the desire to be present with someone, to share in their joys and sorrows, and to dream of a world beyond the constraints of reality. The imagery of flying to warm lands and the defiance of time and fate add a layer of depth and wonder. Truly a moving piece.
Every human relationship ends tragically. It's either breakup or death. And amongst all the death kinds, falling into the long dark together doesn't seem so bad, does it?
This was so good! ❤️🔥🔥
Thank you, Andrea 💛💛💛
Beautiful imagery and edgy at the same time - talented!
I'm glad it spoke to you 💖💖💖
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!
You are you are you are
God this was delicious ♥️
Which (witch) god specifically? 🖤
The God of all Gods
I don’t mind the dark gods, but the one God is the only one that matters.
Time has paused for us.
Into the abyss of our souls, we sink - hollow, together.
The clock has already stopped; we are eternal.
I hope it will be exactly that 🖤🖤🖤
Ugh. This was glorious.
So thoughtful. Each line felt like you’d considered how you wanted it to land.
You have no idea…
Three evenings of editing.
I’m so happy you sensed the effort!
i love this one. 🩷
Thank you, Venus 💖
This is stunning omg and “died holding hands, cheek to cheek, smiling, in sleep.” is beautiful too ⭐️
I wish I could perish that way. To be forced to live without the person you joined your fate with seems so cruel.
I agree with that “joined your fate with” is so pretty too omg
This poem beautifully captures the essence of love and longing, painting vivid images of connection and escape. It speaks to the desire to be present with someone, to share in their joys and sorrows, and to dream of a world beyond the constraints of reality. The imagery of flying to warm lands and the defiance of time and fate add a layer of depth and wonder. Truly a moving piece.
Thank you for a thoughtful comment, Aaliya ✨️
This was so beautiful and stunning, and the ending made me sad, but it was a lovely moment 🥹
Thank you, Kiwi 🖤🖤🖤
Every human relationship ends tragically. It's either breakup or death. And amongst all the death kinds, falling into the long dark together doesn't seem so bad, does it?
It doesn’t. I’d be happy falling into that darkness in the arms of the one I love.
I will add that to my Kiwi prayer next to finding true love.
I believe in your prayers my friend 🤲🏻
Don’t you dare let me down.
🙏🙏🙏