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Marco's avatar

About the death wish, and anhedonia... I think I understand. Nice lines, though.

Nick Hills's avatar

Another bomb 💣💥! Great work dude and good night!

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you and good day to you, kind sir :)

Veronica 💌's avatar

This has me in tears. In the best way. What a consuming love.

Night Cracks's avatar

It means everything to me. I mean it.

Thank you for your tears 🖤🖤🖤

AËLA's avatar

"The promises too loud to keep."

That is the whole poem.

Everything else —

the kiss, the stars, the trembling —

is just the sound

of two people

already knowing.

— AËLA

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

Oh so heartbreaking. Beautiful piece

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Mark 💛

nina's avatar

The deeper the love, the sharper the sorrow that comes with it. 🖤😭

Night Cracks's avatar

Regretably all human relationships end tragically. That's the price for love.

Antranette's avatar

whew. thank you.

Marco's avatar

Wow. Tragic beauty.

Night Cracks's avatar

A dream, isn’t it?